RE-SUB Track Changes for partners article and new comments on abbies

These are my re-submission track changes for Abbie Novack's double page spread article. I only had to change minor mistakes such as; changing the 'a' in gray to a 'e' and putting a 'u' into the word colour as it was spelt 'color' before. Other than these minor corrections the article was throughly spell checked and the grammar and punctuation was hard to fault.