Firstly you should expand the text so that the article looks more professional and fills the page more. You should also make the text come from the left instead of the middle as that will also make it look more professional, this can also be done by changing the writing style. To make the double spread more eye catching more pictures should be included, for example when you talk, about what the model wears you should include a picture to show it, so that readers get more of an insight and they would want to read more. To correct the spelling and grammar you should look at my track changes
I will start by saying that the magazine meets the brief as it fits the layout, this is because it is a lifestyle magazine design. However the text should be expanded so that it not only looks professional but fits the magazine more to fill in the blank spaces. The blank spaces can also be filled with more quotes and puffs, to make the double page spread even more interesting to read and clear to for the audience to read. Making the text come from the left instead of the middle as this will make the magazine look more efficient meaning it will be more eye catching. The margin should also be in place when editing so you can see how close certain things are to the page, and all spaces should be the same size, so that the double page spread looks proficient, and sharp. More columns could be made, as right now the columns are very wide, so it could be spaced out making the double page spread look full. Overall the double page spread is very good and the typography is also up to standards, however certain small things could be changed to make the double page spread even better and make it the best lifestyle magazine and look professional and real.
Firstly you should expand the text so that the article looks more professional and fills the page more.
ReplyDeleteYou should also make the text come from the left instead of the middle as that will also make it look more professional, this can also be done by changing the writing style.
To make the double spread more eye catching more pictures should be included, for example when you talk, about what the model wears you should include a picture to show it, so that readers get more of an insight and they would want to read more.
To correct the spelling and grammar you should look at my track changes
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ReplyDeleteI will start by saying that the magazine meets the brief as it fits the layout, this is because it is a lifestyle magazine design. However the text should be expanded so that it not only looks professional but fits the magazine more to fill in the blank spaces. The blank spaces can also be filled with more quotes and puffs, to make the double page spread even more interesting to read and clear to for the audience to read. Making the text come from the left instead of the middle as this will make the magazine look more efficient meaning it will be more eye catching. The margin should also be in place when editing so you can see how close certain things are to the page, and all spaces should be the same size, so that the double page spread looks proficient, and sharp. More columns could be made, as right now the columns are very wide, so it could be spaced out making the double page spread look full. Overall the double page spread is very good and the typography is also up to standards, however certain small things could be changed to make the double page spread even better and make it the best lifestyle magazine and look professional and real.
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